I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-eastlake-iana-cfm-considerations-01 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: April-24-2014 IETF LC End Date: May-21-2014 IESG Telechat date: TBD Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as a Best Current Practice, but has some nits that should be fixed before publication. [Ready with nits.] This document provides the IANA Considerations for two registries covering the IEEE Std 802.1Q-2011 CFM OpCode and TLV Type blocks assigned to the IETF. Nits: Most comments that follow are for alignment with the terminology and usage found in IEEE Std 802.1Q-2011. General: globally replace "Continuity" with "Connectivity". General: globally replace "Codepoints" with "Code Points". General: globally replace "Op-Code" with "OpCode". Page 3, 2nd paragraph, 2nd sentence: change "IANA Consideration" to "IANA Considerations". Page 5, 1st paragraph: end the reference with a period. Page 5, 2nd paragraph: replace "Mansfield, S." with "and S. Mansfield" to match http://www.rfc-editor.org/in-notes/rfc-ref.txt. Hey, I'm running out of nits to pick here. :-) -Peter Yee