>>>>> "Scott" == Scott Brim <scott.brim@xxxxxxxxx> writes: Scott> In that first paragraph, I would prefer to say "privacy" Scott> rather than "pervasive monitoring". Vulnerability to Scott> pervasive monitoring is just one way in which privacy Scott> problems show themselves. It shouldn't be the only angle from Scott> which the problems are viewed. Yes, but I don't think a general privacy requirement is appropriate for this document. Here, we're trying to document a consensus that we want to look at specific attacks when people monitor at a bunch of points, combine data, etc. That's more specific than privacy, and that specific question is one I want WGs to answer.