I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Document: draft-ietf-geopriv-res-gw-lis-discovery-08 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: Nov-18-2013 IETF LC End Date: Jul-31-2013 IESG Telechat date: Nov-21-2013 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. [Ready with nits] The draft describes a means by which Devices behind a residential gateway may discover the correct Location Information Server on the access network providing Internet access to residential gateway. The Device may thereby gain access to certain location-based services. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits: Page 13, 3rd paragraph, 3rd sentence: change ³even in the² to ³even if the². Insert ³degree of² before ³accuracy².