I think that this I-D is flawed and should not become an RFC. It has several implicit presumptions that I think wrong. 1) It does not state its target audience until, perhaps, the reference in the Conclusions, to WG Chairs. It makes no mention of the consensus calls made by ADs, such as at IETF Last Call, which I think far more important. If a WG Chair calls it wrong, there are ADs and IESG who may put things right. When an AD does so, it may be time to abandon hope; and it is some, a few, of the consensus calls made by ADs at IETF Last Call that I have thought plain wrong, more so than those by WG Chairs. Are ADs assumed to be above and beyond the considerations in this I-D:-( 2) There is an extensive discussion on the show of hands and the hum. What technology allows you to conduct those on a mailing list? The fundamental rule of the IETF, for me, is that business is conducted on the mailing list. What happens at meetings some find useful, and it may be the quickest way to make progress on thorny issues, but the consensus call belongs on the mailing list. Unless this I-D is intending to subvert that. 3) References to working groups with 100 active participants sound like a chimera. I track quite a number of lists, and some have about five active participants. (Some Working Group Last Calls attract one or even zero responses; the reactions of chairs to this is interesting and varies widely). Even the busiest lists, v6ops and tcpm, for me, do not remotely approach 100 active participants. 4) "Five people for and one hundred people against might still be rough consensus". Can you see the presumption in that? Read on and the following text makes it clear that five are 'right' and one hundred 'wrong', but you are presuming that "for" is the right answer. The right answer to a consensus call is a consensus,which can be "against", as much as "for", something that does not seem to be contemplated here. 5) Good WG chairs, and happily there are plenty of them, make their presumptions plain, as in asking for information about implementations at or around judging consensus. The views of someone who has independently produced rough code is then likely to outweigh those of a dozen people who have not, so three such expressing a view in one direction will prevail over several dozen who have not in the opposite direction. (This is all right as far as it goes, but I would like the views of users and operators to count for even more, since it is they who have the most to gain or lose; but sadly, their representation here is small and often not apparent). You quote Dave Clark's aphorism but then ignore half of it. 6) The document is strangely silent about what the vast mass of the IETF who are not WG Chairs might do to help reach a consensus, such as express an opinion, clearly, technically; else, perhaps, keep quiet. 7) As has been said before when documents like this are up for discussion, the IETF is an organisation of engineers and, for the most part, we do it rather well. Managing and leading loose and diverse groups of people is more psychology or sociology than technology, at which we are mostly amateurs. We then go beyond our capabilities and get it wrong. As here. Tom Petch ----- Original Message ----- From: "Pete Resnick" <presnick@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> To: "Mark Nottingham" <mnot@xxxxxxxx> Cc: <ietf@xxxxxxxx> Sent: Monday, October 07, 2013 6:45 AM Subject: Re: Last calling draft-resnick-on-consensus > On 10/6/13 7:30 PM, Mark Nottingham wrote: > > This is a VERY useful document, and I look forward to compelling my WG participants to read it, with a pop quiz afterwards. > > > > I've been exceedingly satisfied to hear this sort of thing from you and > the other folks who posted and talked to me about this. > > > The only issue I see is its length; while dedicated IETFers won't have a problem reading such a lengthy document, the people who could benefit most - new, potential or casual participants - will give up early, I fear. > > > > Could we have someone take an editorial knife to it? Some of the descriptions of situations are quite long, and there's a fair amount of repetition in the document. Some of the paragraphs are quite long as well. I reckon 2-4 pages could be saved, making it appealing to a much wider audience. > > > > I would be really disappointed by this. Indeed, my primary target was > not at all new or casual participants; it was really intended for the > dedicated folks and the chairs. I hope this is the start of a serious > discussion in the IETF, not a primer for how the IETF works at a high > level. For newer folks, I'm fine with the idea that some of this can be > either incorporated into the Tao or the newcomer's orientation, or > separated into a smaller primer document. But I really believe the long > form is needed for real discussions among folks in the community. > > > Beyond that, the only suggestion I'd make is an alternate title -- "Why We Hum." Or maybe "The Things We Hum And Do Not Say" (apologies to Jerry Maguire). > > > > And here I was originally paying homage to Wittgenstein, though it even > got too long for that. Taken under advisement. > > Now, off to tackle Dave's excellent (and extensive) review. > > pr > > -- > Pete Resnick<http://www.qualcomm.com/~presnick/> > Qualcomm Technologies, Inc. - +1 (858)651-4478 > >