Re: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-repute-model-08

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Hi Roni,

I didn't see your previous review for some reason.  I can't respond in full now as I'm about to travel, but I will over the long weekend (unless Andrew gets to it first).

Thanks,

-MSK



On Sat, Aug 31, 2013 at 4:27 AM, Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:

I was asked to review the 08 version but my comments from 07 were not addressed and I did not see any response. So I am resending my previous review

As for making it a standard track document, I am not sure since it looks to me as an overview and not standard. And there is no normative language in the document.

Roni Even

 

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-repute-model-07

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2013–8–20

IETF LC End Date: 2013-8–29

IESG Telechat date:

 

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC.

 

 

Major issues:

Minor issues:

I was wondering why the “Further Discussion” section 9.3 is part of the security section. I think it should be a separate section.

Nits/editorial comments:

Section 3 the end of 2nd paragraph “mechansisms” to “mechanisms”

 

 



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