Hi Fatai, I think you nicely answered your own questions :-) I would suggest adding a small section including all of the statements you made in your email. (Well, no need to refer to Berlin and the CCAMP chairs :-) Cheers, Adrian From: Fatai Zhang [mailto:zhangfatai@xxxxxxxxxx] Hi Adrian, Thanks very much. I can update the nits and editorial issues quickly, but I would like to discuss more with you for the following points to make things clear before I update the draft. ========================================================================================= Please consider and note what updates to GMPLS management tools are needed. [Fatai]This has been mentioned in [Framework] document. Did you mean that we need add one sentence in some place of this document to refer to [Framework] document to mention management tools? Are there any changes to the Alarms that might arise? We have a document for that. [Fatai] No. RFC4783 is still applicable. Are there any changes to the way OAM is controlled? We have a document for that. [Fatai] No, it could be done through NMS or [draft-ietf-ccamp-rsvp-te-sdh-otn-oam-ext]. Should the new G-PIDs show in the TC MIB managed by IANA at https://www.iana.org/assignments/ianagmplstc-mib/ianagmplstc-mib.xhtml This should happen automgically when the feeding registries are updated but it is probably best to add a specific request for IANA. [Fatai] Will do that. Will other MIB work be needed (in the future) to make it possible to read new information (labels, tspecs) from network devices? [Fatai] I am not sure. I asked the similar question (not on this draft) during Berlin meeting. The chairs answered that it could be driven by drafts. Best Regards Fatai -----Original Message----- As sponsoring AD I have the following last call comments I hope you will take on board. Thanks, Adrian Please fix the two lines that are too long (see idnits) --- Please expand "OTN" on first use in the main text. Please expand "TS" on its first use. --- 6.2 The ingress node of an LSP MAY include Label ERO (Explicit Route Object) to indicate the label in each hops along the path. Missing "subobject". --- 6.2.1 When an upstream node receives a Resv message containing an GENERALIZED_LABEL object s/an/a/ --- Please consider and note what updates to GMPLS management tools are needed. Are there any changes to the Alarms that might arise? We have a document for that. Are there any changes to the way OAM is controlled? We have a document for that. Should the new G-PIDs show in the TC MIB managed by IANA at https://www.iana.org/assignments/ianagmplstc-mib/ianagmplstc-mib.xhtml This should happen automgically when the feeding registries are updated but it is probably best to add a specific request for IANA. Will other MIB work be needed (in the future) to make it possible to read new information (labels, tspecs) from network devices? --- Please fix so that you have three sections: Authors' Addresses (only those people on the front page) Contributors (other people who made significant text contributions to the document) Acknowledgements (other people who helped with the work) --- [OTN-OSPF] should be a normative reference for its use to define the value of the switching type used in signaling. _______________________________________________ CCAMP mailing list CCAMP@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ccamp |