Great document, I really liked. Same as SM I would suggest change "western" for something else. And I would also suggest to move section 4 before explaining the titles. I guess the reading would be much easier. Regards, as On 7/10/13 9:55 PM, S Moonesamy wrote: > Hi Deng Hui, > At 17:04 10-07-2013, Hui Deng wrote: >> We submitted two drafts to help people here to correctly call chinese >> people names: >> >> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-deng-call-chinese-names-00 >> >> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-zcao-chinese-pronounce-00 > > I would like to thank you and your co-author on taking the initiative > to write the drafts. I don't know whether I am western or not. :-) > > In Section 3 of draft-deng-call-chinese-names-00: > > 'Two generic titles that have similar meanings to "Mr." and > "Ms./Mrs." are "Xian1sheng1" and "Nv3Shi4".' > > "(1,2,3,4 in this section will be explained in next section) > > There are digits in two words in the above. I suggest making the > comment about the numbers clearer by mentioning that the digits are > intentional and they are used to denote the tone. > > Regards, > S. Moonesamy