Greg, RFC 6428 expands RDI as: RDI: Remote Defect Indication /Loa On 2013-01-07 21:51, Greg Mirsky wrote:
Dear Nabil, can we avoid different interpretation of the same abbreviation (RDI): RDI Remote Defect Indication for Continuity Check Message RDI Reverse Defect Indication AFAIK, the latter form is the interpretation used by both IEEE 802.1ag and Y.1731. How useful is the first form? Regards, Greg On Fri, Jan 4, 2013 at 8:17 AM, Bitar, Nabil N <nabil.n.bitar@xxxxxxxxxxx <mailto:nabil.n.bitar@xxxxxxxxxxx>> wrote: Hi Dave, Related to abbreviations comment below and to be clearer, I renamed the original terminology section to "Abbreviations and Terminology". I also created a subsection called "Abbreviations" ,and "Terminology" became the second subsection. Here iis how the edits look 3. Abbreviations and Terminology____ 3.1. Abbreviations____ AISAlarm Indication Signal____ ACAttachment Circuit____ BFDBidirectional Forwarding Detection____ CCContinuity Check____ CCMContinuity Check Message____ CECustomer Equipment____ CVConnectivity Verification____ E-LMI Ethernet Local Management Interface____ EVCEthernet Virtual Circuit____ LDPLabel Distribution Protocol____ LoSLoss of Signal____ MAMaintenance Association____ MDMaintenance Domain____ MEMaintenance Entity____ MEGMaintenance Entity Group____ MEPMaintenance End Point____ MIPMaintenance End Point____ MPLSMultiprotocol Label Switching____ MS-PW Multi-Segment Pseudowire____ NSNative Service____ OAMOperations, Administration, and Maintenance____ PEProvider Edge____ PSNPacket Switched Network____ PWPseudowire____ RDIRemote Defect Indication for Continuity Check Message____ RDI Reverse Defect Indication S-PESwitching Provider Edge____ TLVType Length Value____ T-PETerminating Provider Edge____ __ __ 3.2. Terminology____ This document uses the following terms with corresponding definitions: ____ - MD Level:Maintenance Domain (MD) Level which identifies a value in the range of 0-7 associated with Ethernet OAM frame. MD Level identifies the span of the Ethernet OAM frame.____ - MEP:Maintenance End Point is responsible for origination and termination of OAM frames for a given MEG.____ - MIP: Maintenance Intermediate Point is located between peer MEPs and can process OAM frames but does not initiate or terminate them.____ Further, this document also uses the terminology and conventions used in [RFC6310].____ Thanks, Nabil From: <Bitar>, Nabil N <nabil.n.bitar@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx <mailto:nabil.n.bitar@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>> Date: Wednesday, January 2, 2013 11:28 AM To: "Black, David" <david.black@xxxxxxx <mailto:david.black@xxxxxxx>>, "dinmohan@xxxxxxxxxxx <mailto:dinmohan@xxxxxxxxxxx>" <dinmohan@xxxxxxxxxxx <mailto:dinmohan@xxxxxxxxxxx>>, "Bitar, Nabil N" <nabil.n.bitar@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx <mailto:nabil.n.bitar@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>>, Sagessi <sajassi@xxxxxxxxx <mailto:sajassi@xxxxxxxxx>>, "gen-art@xxxxxxxx <mailto:gen-art@xxxxxxxx>" <gen-art@xxxxxxxx <mailto:gen-art@xxxxxxxx>> Cc: "pwe3@xxxxxxxx <mailto:pwe3@xxxxxxxx>" <pwe3@xxxxxxxx <mailto:pwe3@xxxxxxxx>>, "ietf@xxxxxxxx <mailto:ietf@xxxxxxxx>" <ietf@xxxxxxxx <mailto:ietf@xxxxxxxx>> Subject: Re: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pwe3-mpls-eth-oam-iwk-06 Hi Dave, Sorry for a late reply addressing your comments. Please, see inline. Thanks, Nabil From: "Black, David" <david.black@xxxxxxx <mailto:david.black@xxxxxxx>> Date: Monday, August 20, 2012 8:57 PM To: "dinmohan@xxxxxxxxxxx <mailto:dinmohan@xxxxxxxxxxx>" <dinmohan@xxxxxxxxxxx <mailto:dinmohan@xxxxxxxxxxx>>, "Bitar, Nabil N" <nabil.n.bitar@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx <mailto:nabil.n.bitar@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>>, Sagessi <sajassi@xxxxxxxxx <mailto:sajassi@xxxxxxxxx>>, "gen-art@xxxxxxxx <mailto:gen-art@xxxxxxxx>" <gen-art@xxxxxxxx <mailto:gen-art@xxxxxxxx>> Cc: "Black, David" <david.black@xxxxxxx <mailto:david.black@xxxxxxx>>, "pwe3@xxxxxxxx <mailto:pwe3@xxxxxxxx>" <pwe3@xxxxxxxx <mailto:pwe3@xxxxxxxx>>, "ietf@xxxxxxxx <mailto:ietf@xxxxxxxx>" <ietf@xxxxxxxx <mailto:ietf@xxxxxxxx>> Subject: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pwe3-mpls-eth-oam-iwk-06 I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-pwe3-mpls-eth-oam-iwk-06 Reviewer: David L. Black Review Date: August 20, 2012 IETF LC End Date: August 20, 2012 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. <NB> Thanks. This draft covers defect behavior for Ethernet pseudowires, including defect state mapping and PE defect reporting behavior. The draft is generally in good shape. I found a few minor nits. 1) The draft uses a lot of acronyms - while each acronym appears to be expanded on first use, an additional section near the start of the draft listing all of them would be helpful. <NB> Done. 2) There's a typo in the first paragraph of section 2: covers the following Ethernet OAM (Opertaions, Administration and Opertaions -> Operations. <NB> Thanks. Done. 3) The following normative reference is incomplete - please add additional information that will enable a reader to locate the referenced document: [MEF16] "Ethernet Local Management Interface", MEF16, January 2006. [MEF16] "Ethernet Local Management Interface", Metro Ethernet Forum Technical Specification MEF16, January 2006. <NB> changed it to : 4) idnits2.12.13 did not like the pagination: == The page length should not exceed 58 lines per page, but there was 22 longer pages, the longest (page 1) being 61 lines <NB> That will be fixed. Thanks, --David ---------------------------------------------------- David L. 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