Hi Dave, Related to abbreviations comment below and to be clearer, I renamed the original terminology section to "Abbreviations and Terminology". I also created a subsection called "Abbreviations" ,and "Terminology" became the second subsection. Here iis how the edits look 3. Abbreviations and Terminology3.1. Abbreviations AIS
Alarm Indication Signal AC
Attachment Circuit BFD
Bidirectional Forwarding Detection CC
Continuity Check CCM
Continuity Check Message CE
Customer Equipment CV
Connectivity Verification E-LMI Ethernet Local Management Interface EVC
Ethernet Virtual Circuit LDP
Label Distribution Protocol LoS
Loss of Signal MA Maintenance Association MD
Maintenance Domain ME
Maintenance Entity MEG
Maintenance Entity Group MEP
Maintenance End Point MIP
Maintenance End Point MPLS
Multiprotocol Label Switching MS-PW Multi-Segment Pseudowire NS
Native Service OAM
Operations, Administration, and Maintenance PE
Provider Edge PSN
Packet Switched Network PW
Pseudowire RDI
Remote Defect Indication for Continuity Check Message RDI Reverse Defect Indication S-PE
Switching Provider Edge TLV
Type Length Value T-PE
Terminating Provider Edge 3.2. TerminologyThis
document uses the following terms with corresponding definitions: - MD Level: Maintenance Domain (MD) Level which
identifies a value in the range of 0-7 associated with Ethernet OAM frame. MD
Level identifies the span of the Ethernet OAM frame. - MEP: Maintenance End Point is responsible for
origination and termination of OAM frames for a given MEG. - MIP: Maintenance Intermediate Point is located
between peer MEPs and can process OAM frames but does not initiate or terminate
them. Further,
this document also uses the terminology and conventions used in [RFC6310]. Thanks, Nabil From: <Bitar>, Nabil N <nabil.n.bitar@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> Date: Wednesday, January 2, 2013 11:28 AM To: "Black, David" <david.black@xxxxxxx>, "dinmohan@xxxxxxxxxxx" <dinmohan@xxxxxxxxxxx>, "Bitar, Nabil N" <nabil.n.bitar@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>, Sagessi <sajassi@xxxxxxxxx>, "gen-art@xxxxxxxx" <gen-art@xxxxxxxx> Cc: "pwe3@xxxxxxxx" <pwe3@xxxxxxxx>, "ietf@xxxxxxxx" <ietf@xxxxxxxx> Subject: Re: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pwe3-mpls-eth-oam-iwk-06 Hi Dave, Sorry for a late reply addressing your comments. Please, see inline. Thanks, Nabil From: "Black, David" <david.black@xxxxxxx> Date: Monday, August 20, 2012 8:57 PM To: "dinmohan@xxxxxxxxxxx" <dinmohan@xxxxxxxxxxx>, "Bitar, Nabil N" <nabil.n.bitar@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>, Sagessi <sajassi@xxxxxxxxx>, "gen-art@xxxxxxxx" <gen-art@xxxxxxxx> Cc: "Black, David" <david.black@xxxxxxx>, "pwe3@xxxxxxxx" <pwe3@xxxxxxxx>, "ietf@xxxxxxxx" <ietf@xxxxxxxx> Subject: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pwe3-mpls-eth-oam-iwk-06 I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-pwe3-mpls-eth-oam-iwk-06 Reviewer: David L. Black Review Date: August 20, 2012 IETF LC End Date: August 20, 2012 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. <NB> Thanks.
This draft covers defect behavior for Ethernet pseudowires, including defect state mapping and PE defect reporting behavior. The draft is generally in good shape. I found a few minor nits.
1) The draft uses a lot of acronyms - while each acronym appears to be expanded on first use, an additional section near the start of the draft listing all of them would be helpful. <NB> Done. <NB> Thanks. Done.
3) The following normative reference is incomplete - please add additional information that will enable a reader to locate the referenced document:
[MEF16] "Ethernet Local Management Interface", MEF16, January 2006. [MEF16] "Ethernet Local Management Interface", Metro Ethernet Forum Technical Specification MEF16, January 2006. <NB> changed it to :
4) idnits 2.12.13 did not like the pagination:
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