Re: Last Call: <draft-yevstifeyev-disclosure-relation-00.txt> (The 'disclosure' Link Relation Type) to Informational RFC

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2011/12/13 SM <sm@xxxxxxxxxxxx>:
> At 11:07 13-12-2011, Mykyta Yevstifeyev wrote:
>>
>> This may be read as if RFC 5988 is to determine all the rel types that
>> were used at the time of its writing, but I don't think the paragraph
>> directly implies this.  I mean that it hasn't been registered either
>> centralized (in RFC 5988) or separately here.
>
>
> In the Introduction Section, the following sentence could be dropped:
>
>  "However, 'disclosure' relation type has not been mentioned in RFC 5988
>   when creating the registry for relation types; nor was it registered
>   separately."
>
> The last paragraph of that section explains what the document is about.

I've already done this, per Julian's comments.

>
> I suggest an editorial change in Section 2:
>
>  "Whenever the 'disclosure' relation is defined, the target IRI
>   [RFC5998] MUST either"

Added.

>
> Quoting the example in Section 3:
>
>  "The following are the patent disclosures known at present made
>     with respect to this specification:
>     <ul><a rel="disclosure" href="http://patent.gov/8546987";>
>     U.S. Patent No. 8546987</a></ul>
>     <ul><a rel="disclosure" href="http://ipr.su/pat/98745-6";>
>     U.S.S.R. Patent No. 98745-6</a></ul>
>     <ul><a rel="disclosure" href="ftp://ftp.legal.va/a/patent3.pdf";>
>     Vatical City State Patent No. 3</a></ul>"
>
> If the IETF takes the security of the Vatican City seriously (there's a typo
> in the example), I suggest adding a ".example" at the end of the domain
> names.

I'm fine with this.  So I've changed this to:

     The following are the patent disclosures known at present made
     with respect to this specification:
     <ul><a rel="disclosure" href="http://patent.gov.example/8546987";>
     U.S. Patent No. 8546987</a></ul>
     <ul><a rel="disclosure" href="http://ipr.su.example/pat/98745-6";>
     U.S.S.R. Patent No. 98745-6</a></ul>
     <ul><a rel="disclosure" href="http://pat.va.example/a/patent3.pdf";>
     Vatical City State Patent No. 3</a></ul>

Mykyta Yevstifeyev

>
> Regards,
> -sm
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