Re: Last Call: <draft-yevstifeyev-disclosure-relation-00.txt> (The 'disclosure' Link Relation Type) to Informational RFC

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On 13 December 2011 21:50 Julian Reschke <julian.reschke@xxxxxx> wrote:
> On 2011-12-13 20:07, "Mykyta Yevstifeyev (М. Євстіфеєв)" wrote:
>>
>> ...
>>>
>>> Maybe it's worth pointing out that this does not apply as verbatim
>>> instruction, but as HTML example.
>>
>>
>> I have that - "in source code". Maybe I should add "in HTML source code"?
>
>
> The latter sounds good.
>
>>> It would be good to confirm with the W3C that this actually is a
>>> requirement and not only a suggestion (cc'ing the author of PUBRULES).
>>
>>
>> And I have this as well, as I've introduced this extract with "must look
>> like".
>
>
> I'd like to see this confirmed by the W3C.
>
>>> Such provisions existed in previous versions of Publication Rules as
>>> well, so such source text is often found in different W3C documents
>>> that predated publication of RFC 5988 significantly. However,
>>> 'disclosure' relation type has not been mentioned in RFC 5988 when
>>> creating the registry for relation types; nor was it registered
>>> separately.
>>>
>>> I think the paragraph above is misleading. It was not the point of RFC
>>> 5988 to define all current link relations (it *did* add existing HTML4
>>> relations and Atom relations to the new registry but that's a separate
>>> thing).
>>
>>
>> This may be read as if RFC 5988 is to determine all the rel types that
>> were used at the time of its writing, but I don't think the paragraph
>> directly implies this. I mean that it hasn't been registered either
>> centralized (in RFC 5988) or separately here.
>
>
> Well, it doesn't say anything interesting, and might confuse people to think
> this was an oversight in 5988. Just drop it.

OK, I will.

>
>>> 2. 'disclosure' Link Relation Type
>>>
>>> Whenever the 'disclosure' relation is defined, the target IRI MUST
>>> either
>>>
>>> (1) designate a list of patent disclosures, or
>>>
>>> (2) refer to a particular patent disclosure made with respect to the
>>> material being referenced by context IRI.
>>>
>>> I think in both cases the patent disclosure(s) apply to the context, no?
>>
>>
>> Yes. I may change to:
>>
>>> Whenever the 'disclosure' relation is defined, the target IRI MUST
>>> either
>>>
>>> (1) designate a list of patent disclosures, or
>>>
>>> (2) refer to a particular patent disclosure
>>>
>>> made with respect to the material being referenced by context IRI.
>>
>>
>> to improve readability.
>
>
> OK.
>
>>> This section provides several examples of possible use of
>>> 'disclosure' relation type.
>>>
>>> If the page <http://example.org/ipr/meta-spec/> contains a list of
>>> patent disclosures made with respect to the specification found at
>>> <http://example.org/specs/meta-spec/spec.html>, the latter would have
>>> the following fragment of HTML source code:
>>>
>>> <html>
>>> ...
>>> Please visit
>>> <a rel="disclosure" href="http://example.org/ipr/meta-spec/";> the
>>> IPR page</a> for the list of patent disclosures made with respect
>>> to this specification.
>>> ...
>>> </html>
>>>
>>> Or, in the case of Link header field, the HTTP response would contain
>>> the following header field:
>>>
>>> Link: <http://example.org/ipr/meta-spec/>; rel="disclosure";
>>> title="Patent Disclosures List"
>>>
>>> (Please note that the actual header field will not contain the line
>>> break after 'rel' parameter.)
>>>
>>> It could if the second line was indented; maybe adjust the example?
>>
>>
>> I have:
>>
>>> Link: <http://example.org/ipr/meta-spec/>; rel="disclosure";
>>> title="Patent Disclosures List"
>>
>>
>> both lines are indented with 5 Courier white spaces, and so I think my
>> explanation in parentheses is correct.
>
>
> Well, HTTP header fields start at column 0 in a message.
>
> Of course you can indent your examples, but my point was that if you indent
> the second line *more*, it would be valid. Like this:
>
>     Link: <http://example.org/ipr/meta-spec/>; rel="disclosure";
>           title="Patent Disclosures List"

This is OK as well.

Mykyta Yevstifeyev

>
>> ...
>
>
> Best regards, Julian
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