Hi Mykyta, Thank you for reviewing my draft. Responses inline.... On Sat, March 26, 2011 10:06 pm, Mykyta Yevstifeyev wrote: > Hello, > > A question on the flowing extract: > >> This memo contains a new numberspace to be managed by IANA, a >> registry used to indicate a password preprocessing technique. The >> initial layout of this registry SHALL be: >> >> o 0x00 : None >> >> o 0x01 :RFC2759 <http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc2759> >> >> o 0x02 : SASLprep >> >> The Prep field is 8 bits long and all other values are available >> through assignment by IANA. IANA is instructed to assign values >> based on "Specification Required" (see [RFC5226 >> <http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc5226>]). > It contains the description of new registry. but it fails to give it the > distinctive definition. Among other, what is the exact name of the > registry? How are the fields named? The sentence "The Prep field is 8 > bits long and all other values are available through assignment by > IANA." also makes me confusing. This means that the Prep field is not > assigned by IANA? Finally, 0x00 is Unassigned or Reserved? > > Thus, this extract needs more clarification. How would the following look to you: "This memo contains a new numberspace to be managed by IANA, the password preprocessing method (Prep) registry. The initial layout of this registry SHALL be: o 0x00 : None (no preprocessing is performed) o 0x01 : RFC2759 o 0x02 : SASLprep The Prep field is 8 bits long and all other values are available through assignment by IANA. IANA is instructed to assign values based on "Specification Required" (see [RFC5226])." regards, Dan. _______________________________________________ Ietf mailing list Ietf@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf