Gen-ART LC review of draft-harkins-ipsecme-spsk-auth-03

["Roni Even" <ron.even.tlv@xxxxxxxxx>]

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

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Document: draft-harkins-ipsecme-spsk-auth-03

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2011–4–11

IETF LC End Date: 2011–4–23

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Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as an Experimental RFC.

 

Major issues:

 

 

Minor issues:

 

1. In section 8.5 and 8.6 the draft says that “If no more password pre-processing techniques are supported the exchange MUST be   terminated.”  Reading section 6, I thought that NONE MUST be supported for interoperability purpose.
2. In section 8.1 and in figure 1 and figure 2 is there a maximum value for “counter”?

 

 

Nits/editorial comments:

 

1.       In section 1 just before 1.1 you have “suceed” instead of “succeed”

2.       In section 4 third bullet “an” instead of “and”

3.       In section 4.2 “Two elementx” instead of “Two elements”

4.       In section 5 second row “authenticaiton” should be “authentication”

5.       In section 6 fourth row “identitcal” instead of “identical”

 

 

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