Re: Gen-ART LC review of draft-zhu-mobileme-doc-04

[Lixia Zhang <lixia@xxxxxxxxxxx>]

On Mar 4, 2011, at 6:01 AM, Roni Even wrote:

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.

Document: draft-zhu-mobileme-doc-04

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2011–3–4

IETF LC End Date: 2011–3–18

IESG Telechat date:

 

Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as Informational   RFC.

 

Major issues:

 

 

Minor issues:

 

In section 5 and in section 6.1 second bullet you mention that the end to end connection is TCP while in other places like section 3, 4^th paragraph you mention that UDP is used to tunnel packet end to end.  So what are the TCP connections used for?

section 3 talks about the use of UDP encapsulation for end host's data packets.

section 5 and section 6.1 refer to TCP connections used by user applications running on end hosts.

 

Nits/editorial comments:

 

 

 

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