Gen-ART LC review of draft-zhu-mobileme-doc-04

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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.

 

Document: draft-zhu-mobileme-doc-04

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2011–3–4

IETF LC End Date: 2011–3–18

IESG Telechat date:

 

Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as Informational   RFC.

 

Major issues:

 

 

Minor issues:

 

In section 5 and in section 6.1 second bullet you mention that the end to end connection is TCP while in other places like section 3, 4th paragraph you mention that UDP is used to tunnel packet end to end.  So what are the TCP connections used for?

 

Nits/editorial comments:

 

 

 

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