I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-mrw-nat66-08 Reviewer: Ben Campbell Review Date: 2011-03-01 IETF LC End Date: 2011-03-02 IESG Telechat date: 2011-03-03 (Note: The Last Call deadline and the Telechat are only a day apart, so this review serves both purpose) Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an experimental RFC. I have a few nit comments that could probably be dealt with in Auth48 or by the RFC editori Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: -- 1.1, 4 paragraphs from end: Please expand RIR on first mention. -- 1.2, 2nd paragraph: "... and the defined address mapping mechanism is checksum-neutral." Redundant with previous paragraph. -- 5, third bullet: "An application instance wishing to establish communication with a peer which is "behind" an NPTv6 Translator ..." s / which / that _______________________________________________ Ietf mailing list Ietf@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf