I am sorry I got the wrong subject list for this. IT was a different draft I was trying to deal with. I will look at this document soon. Jim > -----Original Message----- > From: Suresh Krishnan [mailto:suresh.krishnan@xxxxxxxxxxxx] > Sent: Thursday, May 06, 2010 10:26 AM > To: Jim Schaad > Cc: 'IETF discussion list' > Subject: Re: Last Call: draft-ietf-csi-send-cert (Certificate profile > and certificate management for SEND) to Proposed Standard > > Hi Jim, > I think you are commenting on the wrong document. You probably meant > to comment on draft-housley-cms-content-constraints-extn whose last > call > period ended on April 19th. > > Thanks > Suresh > > On 10-05-06 12:06 AM, Jim Schaad wrote: > > I have the following comments on this document > > > > 1. I find the following statement ambiguous: > > > > CCC is not used to constrain MIME encapsulated data, i.e., MIME > > wrapping layers are not processed with regard to CCC. > > > > I do not know if this means that processing is to stop at a MIME > > encapsulation layer, or if it means that the id-data content type > cannot be > > constrained. (Or perhaps both meanings are correct.) IF the first > is meant > > I would suggest "CCC processing stops when a MIME encapsulation layer > is > > encountered." If the second is meant then it should say "CCC cannot > be used > > to constrain the creation of the id-data content type." > > > > 2. It is my personal opinion that the algorithm as described is > overly > > confusing. I was able to fully understand the procedure only by > interacting > > with the authors and not from the document. While there have been > some > > changes to the text since that time, I do not believe that the basic > > problems with making the algorithm clear have been addressed in the > > document. I did supply what I considered to be a much simpler > version of > > the algorithm to the authors, but they decided not to make the > changes that > > I outlined in my suggested text. > > > > Jim > > > > > > _______________________________________________ > > Ietf mailing list > > Ietf@xxxxxxxx > > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf _______________________________________________ Ietf mailing list Ietf@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf