Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-turner-asymmetrickeyformat-05

"Roni Even" <ron.even.tlv@xxxxxxxxx> · Sun, 18 Apr 2010 09:45:49 +0300

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Document: draft-turner-asymmetrickeyformat-05

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date: 2010-4-18

IESG Telechat date: 2010-4-22

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed
Standard. I have some nits

Nits/editorial comments:

 In section 7 what you are
     registering is a media subtype and not a media type. The media type is
     application. So “defines
     a new media type” should be “defines a new media subtype” and “Registration of media type”
     should be “Registration
     of media subtype”.
 The document defines new
     object identifiers like id-ct-KP-aKeyPackage and
     AsymmetricKeyPackageModuleV1.  Where is the list of these identifiers
     kept and how do you update this list in order to guarantee the uniqueness
     of these identifiers.

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