Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-hollenbeck-rfc4933bis-02

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Document: draft-hollenbeck-rfc4933bis-02
Reviewer: Ben Campbell
Review Date: 13 July 2009
IESG Telechat date: 16 July 2009

Summary:

The draft is ready for publication. However, I have a couple of minor comments about the implementation report at http://www.ietf.org/IESG/Implementations/RFCs3730-3734_implem.txt that may relate to the progression to draft standard.

(I apologize for not making these comments sooner--this is the first progression to draft that I have reviewed, and only recently had thoughts on the implementation report.)

Major issues:

None.

Minor issues:


I have a a couple comments about the implementation report. I do not necessarily consider them blocking issues; I bring them up merely for consideration.

-- The implementation report refers to RFC and draft versions that are (at least) a couple of generations old. I assume that the authors believe that they also apply to this draft, but it would be good to have an explicit assertion of that.

-- It would help to have an explicit assertion whether the report author believes the standard meets the requirements to progress to draft. I think the report implies a "yes", but it leaves the reader to draw that conclusion.

Nits/editorial comments:

None
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