Hi Paul, Paul Hoffman wrote: >> Agree. And this topic (the recipient list of the review) is something >> I think hard about before I send out any review. > > That's good to hear, but I didn't see it reflected in the document; > maybe your co-authors had a different slant. Regardless, my preference > is to encourage group communication during reviews for anything other > than editorial nits and "I was told to read this; I did; it was fine" > reviews. Group communication, in both directions for a review, helps > everyone. It also helps prevent a WG hearing that "I changed this thing > we had all agreed to because I was told to by { a security person | an > IAB member | an ex-AD | ... }". Those kinds of changes tend to make a > document weaker if they aren't agreed to and possibly modified by the WG > who worked on the document. I will add the following text regarding this in a new section 4.2 before the current section 4.2. ***************************START OF TEXT******************************** 4.2 Recipients of the review The list of recipients of the review is tricky to get right. The main idea is to make sure all the relevant people receive the review. The recipient list is determined mainly by the following factors * The timeframe of the review (early vs. late) * The contents of the review (editorial vs. technical) Early reviews are usually performed by active participants of a working group. The preferred destination for these reviews is the working group mailing list since it can be reasonably assumed that the persons interested in the document are subscribed to the mailing list. This applies for both technical and editorial issues. Alternately editorial issues can be resolved using a private mail to the author(s). Late reviews are usually performed by persons who are not active participants of the working group and who usually review the draft from a different point of view than the working group. If the contents of the review are mainly editorial in nature, the reviews can be sent just to the authors, the working group chair(s), the document shepherd(s). If the review is of a more technical nature it is considered polite to include the working group mailing list and/or the IETF discussion list. As it is not reasonable to assume that the reviewer will subscribe to the working group mailing list just for discussing this issue, the working group chair(s) need to make sure that this review will get past any moderation controls imposed on non-subscribers by the working group mailing list. ****************************END OF TEXT********************************* Would this resolve your concern? Thanks Suresh _______________________________________________ IETF mailing list IETF@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf