On Thursday 25 May 2006 18:39, The IESG wrote: > The IESG has received a request from an individual submitter to consider > the following document: > > - 'SMTP Submission Service Extension for Future Message Release ' > <draft-vaudreuil-futuredelivery-03.txt> as a Proposed Standard > > The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits > final comments on this action. Please send any comments to the > iesg@xxxxxxxx or ietf@xxxxxxxx mailing lists by 2006-06-22. > > The file can be obtained via > http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-vaudreuil-futuredelivery-03.txt > This is the first time I've seen this document. Based on a once through it seems technically complete and coherent. The security considerations section addressed the issues that I thought of when reading the document. I do have a couple of minor comments: In the change log, it mentions that the term HOLD has been changed to HOLDFOR and HOLDUNTIL in this revision of the draft. In paragraph 4.2.2, MSA interaction with DSN, the obsolete term HOLD still appears in sub-para 2. While minor, this should be corrected prior to publication. There is no collected ABNF. In general, I find having the entire ABNF together for reference to be useful as an implementer and so it would be nice to have in this document. Additionally, I think that the omission mentioned in the previous comment would have been obvious in a collected ABNF. Scott Kitterman _______________________________________________ Ietf@xxxxxxxx https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf