Reviewer: Michael Scharf Review result: Ready with Nits This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review team's ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written primarily for the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's authors and WG to allow them to address any issues raised and also to the IETF discussion list for information. When done at the time of IETF Last Call, the authors should consider this review as part of the last-call comments they receive. Please always CC tsv-art@xxxxxxxx if you reply to or forward this review. This document extends RPL (Routing Protocol for Low-Power and Lossy Networks) so that routes can be computed by a central entity. The specification defines a number of additions to RPL, but most mechanisms apparently reuse RPL as-is. As such, there are no apparent new transport protocol implications. Nits: - As RPL may not be a widely known acronym in the IETF as a whole, at least the abstract could expand it. The current abstract text is very hard to parse for a reader who is not familiar with RPL at all. One basically has to read the introduction to understand what the document is about. - The same may apply to the acronym "DODAG" in the abstract. -- last-call mailing list -- last-call@xxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to last-call-leave@xxxxxxxx
