[Last-Call] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-sipcore-callinfo-rcd-13

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Reviewer: Scott Hollenbeck
Review result: Ready with Nits

I am the assigned ART area reviewer for this draft. I found only one small
issue that might require clarification. In Section 4:

"jCard is a comprehensive and extensible mechanism defined in the STIR RCD
framework." This sentence is confusing because jCard is defined in RFC 7095. It
feels like there's a word or two missing here. Also, this is the first time
that "STIR RCD framework appears in the draft. A reference to
[I-D.ietf-stir-passport-rcd] is probably appropriate, or perhaps a reference to
[I-D.ietf-sipcore-callinfo-rcd] might be more appropriate since that's where
the "jcard" Call-Info Token is defined.


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