Reviewer: Rich Salz Review result: Ready I'm the ARTART reviewer for this document. The kinds of things this directorate looks for are described at https://wiki.ietf.org/group/art/TypicalARTAreaIssues I found this wording initially confusing: "the sender in accordance with AH ([RFC4302] Section 3.3.2) and ESP ([RFC4303] Section 3.3.3) specifications" I suggest "the sender in accordance with the specifications for AH ([RFC4302] Section 3.3.2) and ESP ([RFC4303] Section 3.3.3) ..." That aside, I found the Introduction incredibly useful background information, thank you. I found nothing of concern otherwise. -- last-call mailing list -- last-call@xxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to last-call-leave@xxxxxxxx
