Hi Rich, thank you for your review. > Reviewer: Rich Salz > Review result: Ready > > I'm the ARTART reviewer for this document. The kinds of things this directorate > looks for are described at https://wiki.ietf.org/group/art/TypicalARTAreaIssues > > I found this wording initially confusing: "the sender in accordance with AH > ([RFC4302] Section 3.3.2) and ESP ([RFC4303] Section 3.3.3) specifications" I > suggest "the sender in accordance with the specifications for AH ([RFC4302] > Section 3.3.2) and ESP ([RFC4303] Section 3.3.3) ..." That aside, I found the > Introduction incredibly useful background information, thank you. Thank you. I'll fix the wording as you suggested. > I found nothing of concern otherwise. Regards, Valery. -- last-call mailing list -- last-call@xxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to last-call-leave@xxxxxxxx