[Last-Call] Re: Artart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-rename-esn-02

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Hi Rich,

thank you for your review.

> Reviewer: Rich Salz
> Review result: Ready
> 
> I'm the ARTART reviewer for this document. The kinds of things this directorate
> looks for are described at https://wiki.ietf.org/group/art/TypicalARTAreaIssues
> 
> I found this wording initially confusing: "the sender in accordance with AH
> ([RFC4302] Section 3.3.2) and ESP ([RFC4303] Section 3.3.3) specifications" I
> suggest "the sender in accordance with the specifications for AH ([RFC4302]
> Section 3.3.2) and ESP ([RFC4303] Section 3.3.3) ..." That aside, I found the
> Introduction incredibly useful background information, thank you.

Thank you. I'll fix the wording as you suggested.

> I found nothing of concern otherwise.

Regards,
Valery.

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