[Last-Call] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-stir-rfc4916-update-06

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Reviewer: Jean Mahoney
Review result: Ready with Nits

This document is ready from an ART perspective as it just updates the SIP
Identity header field.

Minor issues:
idnits calls out RFC 3375 as a downref.
The I-D's short title is "RFC4916 Update"; however, there is no mention of
updating RFC 4916 in the document or in the document metadata. Is this
intentional?

Nits:
I picked some nits (comma fixes, consistent use of "header field", etc. See
https://github.com/ajeanmahoney/draft-ietf-stir-rfc4916-update/pull/2/files)
and also converted the XML to v3. These updates can be found here if you would
like to use them: 
https://github.com/ajeanmahoney/draft-ietf-stir-rfc4916-update

Thanks!
Jean



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