Reviewer: Dave Thaler Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned INTDIR reviewer. I found the document well written and easy to read, other than a number of typos and grammatical errors. A PDF with my comments marked up inline can be found at: https://1drv.ms/b/s!Aqj-Bj9PNivcn_xoEc8XRepNkAgJaQ?e=7keL4H A few of my comments are listed below, but see the PDF for many more trivial ones. Section 1.4: "The fast DF recovery solution maintains backwards-compatibility (see Section 4) by ensuring that PEs any unrecognized new BGP Extended Community." I can't parse grammar around "PEs any unrecognized". Perhaps a word missing? Section 2.1: Is it worth adding that the seconds are encoded in network byte order? This might be assumed by most readers but might not hurt to say explicitly. Up to you. Section 3: "To maintain the preference for minimal loss over duplicate traffic, PE1 should carve slightly before PE2 (with skew)." Should the "should" be MUST or SHOULD? Section 4: "[RFC7432] and do not rely on the new SCT BGP extended community." And what? Seems like something is missing here. Dave -- last-call mailing list -- last-call@xxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to last-call-leave@xxxxxxxx
