Gavin
On Thu, Aug 1, 2024 at 9:46 AM Gavin Brown <gavin.brown@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
Hi Tim,
On 31 Jul 2024, at 16:35, Tim Wicinski via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote:
Reviewer: Tim WicinskiReview result: Ready
Hi,
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Status: Minor Nit, Ready to go
I reviewed this document earlier from a request on the regext list, andsent some minor feedback which the Author has incorporated into the current version.
I like and approve of the section on Operational Considerations.
## NIT of question
The Nit tool popped these out:
** Downref: Normative reference to an Informational RFC: RFC 7451
-- Possible downref: Non-RFC (?) normative reference: ref. 'XSD-DATATYPES'
Now 7451 seems to be referenced informally by most documents, including mostmapping additions https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/rfc7451/referencedby/
I will fix this in my working copy.
thanks
I have no opinions currently on the XSD-DATATYPES reference.
Without this reference, this document would still have transitive normative reference to XSD-DATATYPES as RFC 5730 also has it as a normative reference. So I think the reference should be normative but am open to an argument to make it informative.
I think it should be normative also, and was thinking the same thing. I only flagged as the nits tool did as more of something for the document shepherd to make a note of - it's been discussed and the WG feels this is correct.
## worthless NIT
In running one of my grammart thingies on the text it complained about this inSection 10.12 of the change log
Add *the the* Verisign EPP SDK to Section 9
This section will be removed when the document gets published as an RFC, but I will fix it anyway :)
I knew/know it would be removed and I must apologize for being so pedantic.
tim
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