Reviewer: Rich Salz Review result: Has Nits All page references are to the text version available at https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-teas-enhanced-vpn/ I found it frustrating that the VPN acronym was explained in the Introduction but it wasn't until the bottom of p4 that NRP was spelled out. Bottom of page 5 has "The required layered network structure ..." Hubris? ;) Maybe "One possible layered network ..." Other then that, the introduction does a GREAT job of explaining the motivation, issues, and technology involved. This holds true, analogously, for all the other sections. As a result, I am bothered that I have to say "it has nits" because they really pale in comparison to the rest of the text. Congrats to the authors. I paid special attention to the security considerations and could not think of anything not already well-covered there. Even if not addressed, this document is ready and really brings up the quality average of IETF RFCs. -- last-call mailing list -- last-call@xxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to last-call-leave@xxxxxxxx
