[Last-Call] Re: [EXTERNAL] Artart telechat review of draft-ietf-lamps-ocsp-nonce-update-06

[Himanshu Sharma <himanshu=40netskope.com@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Hi Jim

   We are using the word "Nonce octets" to show the clear difference between "Nonce: the complete encoded extension" vs "Nonce octet:  value of the Nonce that gets encoded." 

All the previous RFCs had this confusion and developers interpreted these values wrongly in some implementations. 

Will it fine if I use "Nonce value" instead of "Nonce octets" for example 

"Nonce will be identified by the object identifier id-pkix-ocsp-

   nonce, while the extnValue is the encoded value of Nonce octets.  If
   the Nonce extension is present, then the length of the Nonce octets
   MUST be at least 1 octet and can be up to 128 octets."

will be represented as:

"Nonce will be identified by the object identifier id-pkix-ocsp-

   nonce, while the extnValue is the encoded value of Nonce octets.  If
   the Nonce extension is present, then the length of the Nonce value octets
   MUST be at least 1 octet and can be up to 128 octets."

Please let me know your thoughts.

-Himanshu

On Mon, May 6, 2024 at 11:07 AM Himanshu Sharma <himanshu@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:

Thanks Jim for the review and feedback. I will update the draft to address the review comments soon.

-Himanshu

On Fri, May 3, 2024 at 12:52 PM Jim Fenton via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote:

Reviewer: Jim Fenton
Review result: Ready with Nits

I am the designated ARTART reviewer for this draft. This is a re-review of -06
following my review of -04.

Status: Ready with Nits

Thanks for addressing basically all of my comments from my earlier review. This
is ready to go, although I spotted a few more instances of the overuse of
"octets" in Section 2.1 that result in some awkward wording. Examples and
suggested replacements:

"...while the extnValue is the encoded value of Nonce octets" -> "...while the
extnValue is the encoded value of the nonce"

"...then the length of the Nonce octets MUST be..." -> "...then the length of
the nonce MUST be..."

"...MUST use a minimum length of 32 octets for Nonce octets in the Nonce
extension." -> "...MUST use a minimum length of 32 octets for the nonce in the
nonce extension."

"...that has a Nonce octets with a length..." -> "...that has a nonce with a
length..."

"The value of the Nonce octets MUST be..." -> "The value of the nonce MUST
be..."

"

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