Sergio:
Minor Concerns:
Figures 2, 3, and 4 are not referenced from body of the document. It is
best to include a reference in the body that offers some description of what
the reader is expected to learn from the figure. When I as a Security AD,
the other Security AD was blind. The text-to-audio system that he used was
surprisingly good, but it could not handle ASCII art. The discussion of
the figures was vital to him being able to understand a document. Please
help readers that depend on such tools.
I was not aware of this, thank you very much for pointing it out, seems something important to be addressed.
Do you have any guideline or example about how to best make the change so it works properly with screen readers?
I think you need a small amut of text to summarize the figure. I am unaware of a way to do better that that
Russ |
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