Re: [Last-Call] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-vrrp-rfc5798bis-14

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Hi Vijay,

The line numbers are removed in the -15 version of the draft. 

Thanks,
Acee

> On Dec 18, 2023, at 2:04 PM, Acee Lindem <acee.ietf@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> 
> In any case, I’m not enamored with the line numbers in the pseudo code (irrespective of whether or not they are adoring). These were introduced in RFC 5798 but I don’t see any references to these line numbers (as their existence would imply) and unless anyone sees compelling reason to keep them, I’m going to remove them. 
> 
> Thanks,
> Acee
> 
>> On Dec 18, 2023, at 13:53, Vijay Gurbani <vijay.gurbani@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
>> 
>> Sorry, I meant "adorning code" instead of "adoring code" in the last
>> sentence of the nits/editorial comments.
>> 
>> Thanks,
>> 
>> - vijay
>> 
>> On Mon, Dec 18, 2023 at 12:51 PM Vijay Gurbani via Datatracker <
>> noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote:
>> 
>>> Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani
>>> Review result: Ready
>>> 
>>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
>>> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
>>> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
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>>> 
>>> For more information, please see the FAQ at
>>> 
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>>> 
>>> Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-vrrp-rfc5798bis-14
>>> Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
>>> Review Date: 2023-12-18
>>> IETF LC End Date: 2023-12-11
>>> IESG Telechat date: 2024-01-04
>>> 
>>> Summary: The I-D is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard.  The
>>> document
>>> is well written, with reasons why critical choices in the development of
>>> the
>>> protocol have been made.
>>> 
>>> Major issues: 0
>>> 
>>> Minor issues: 0
>>> 
>>> Nits/editorial comments: 1
>>> 
>>> Nits: I am not sure what the line numbers in Section 6.4.1 and 6.4.2 mean
> 

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