Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-vrrp-rfc5798bis-14 Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani Review Date: 2023-12-18 IETF LC End Date: 2023-12-11 IESG Telechat date: 2024-01-04 Summary: The I-D is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. The document is well written, with reasons why critical choices in the development of the protocol have been made. Major issues: 0 Minor issues: 0 Nits/editorial comments: 1 Nits: I am not sure what the line numbers in Section 6.4.1 and 6.4.2 mean. This is the first time I have seen such adornment of code with line numbers outside of the use of such line numbers in the Basic programming language. However, the document seems inconsistent in that it does not appear to use similar line numbers in the pseudo-code in Section 7.1 and 7.2, for instance. I would advise uniformity in adoring code if possible. -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
