Re: [Last-Call] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-vrrp-rfc5798bis-14

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In any case, I’m not enamored with the line numbers in the pseudo code (irrespective of whether or not they are adoring). These were introduced in RFC 5798 but I don’t see any references to these line numbers (as their existence would imply) and unless anyone sees compelling reason to keep them, I’m going to remove them. 

Thanks,
Acee

> On Dec 18, 2023, at 13:53, Vijay Gurbani <vijay.gurbani@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> 
> Sorry, I meant "adorning code" instead of "adoring code" in the last
> sentence of the nits/editorial comments.
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> - vijay
> 
> On Mon, Dec 18, 2023 at 12:51 PM Vijay Gurbani via Datatracker <
> noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote:
> 
>> Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani
>> Review result: Ready
>> 
>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
>> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
>> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
>> like any other last call comments.
>> 
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>> 
>> Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-vrrp-rfc5798bis-14
>> Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
>> Review Date: 2023-12-18
>> IETF LC End Date: 2023-12-11
>> IESG Telechat date: 2024-01-04
>> 
>> Summary: The I-D is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard.  The
>> document
>> is well written, with reasons why critical choices in the development of
>> the
>> protocol have been made.
>> 
>> Major issues: 0
>> 
>> Minor issues: 0
>> 
>> Nits/editorial comments: 1
>> 
>> Nits: I am not sure what the line numbers in Section 6.4.1 and 6.4.2 mean

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