Hi Dan, Many thanks for this very useful review. Much appreciated. Cheers, Med > -----Message d'origine----- > De : Dan Romascanu via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> > Envoyé : mardi 3 octobre 2023 13:25 > À : gen-art@xxxxxxxx > Cc : alto@xxxxxxxx; draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang.all@xxxxxxxx; last- > call@xxxxxxxx; dromasca@xxxxxxxxx > Objet : Genart last call review of draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang-12 > > Reviewer: Dan Romascanu > Review result: Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by > the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like > any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwik > i.ietf.org%2Fen%2Fgroup%2Fgen%2FGenArtFAQ&data=05%7C01%7Cmohamed.bouca > dair%40orange.com%7C3f7a176a7c964b7f460a08dbc4035e59%7C90c7a20af34b40b > fbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638319290971157645%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d > 8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C > 3000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=PHLW8wKL%2BgNPpbi6vL7GSrJoMlvp0ssflQSYIgQe6ME%3D&r > eserved=0>. > > Document: draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang-12 > Reviewer: Dan Romascanu > > This document defines YANG data models for Operations, Administration, > and Maintenance (OAM) & Management of ALTO. Pperators can use these > data models to set up an ALTO server, create, update and remove ALTO > information resources, manage the access control, configure server > discovery, and collect statistical data. > > I like this document. It is clearly written and very well structured. > I liked the description of requirements, the information model > corresponding to the requirements, and the extension example modules > in the Appendices. These are all very useful for operators who need to > understand and use the YANG modules. > > Understanding and using this document requires a good knowledge of > ALTO. > > My review was focused on the quality and readability of the > information, and > - as I also performed an OPS-DIR early review, on the design and data > modelling issues relevant for operations and manageability. I did not > perform a YANG review, as Andy Bierman undertook this task. > > This document is Ready > Review Date: 2023-10-03 > IETF LC End Date: 2023-10-06 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: Ready > > Major issues: > > Minor issues: > > Nits/editorial comments: > ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez recu ce message par erreur, veuillez le signaler a l'expediteur et le detruire ainsi que les pieces jointes. Les messages electroniques etant susceptibles d'alteration, Orange decline toute responsabilite si ce message a ete altere, deforme ou falsifie. Merci. This message and its attachments may contain confidential or privileged information that may be protected by law; they should not be distributed, used or copied without authorisation. If you have received this email in error, please notify the sender and delete this message and its attachments. As emails may be altered, Orange is not liable for messages that have been modified, changed or falsified. Thank you. -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
