Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. Document: draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang-12 Reviewer: Dan Romascanu This document defines YANG data models for Operations, Administration, and Maintenance (OAM) & Management of ALTO. Pperators can use these data models to set up an ALTO server, create, update and remove ALTO information resources, manage the access control, configure server discovery, and collect statistical data. I like this document. It is clearly written and very well structured. I liked the description of requirements, the information model corresponding to the requirements, and the extension example modules in the Appendices. These are all very useful for operators who need to understand and use the YANG modules. Understanding and using this document requires a good knowledge of ALTO. My review was focused on the quality and readability of the information, and - as I also performed an OPS-DIR early review, on the design and data modelling issues relevant for operations and manageability. I did not perform a YANG review, as Andy Bierman undertook this task. This document is Ready Review Date: 2023-10-03 IETF LC End Date: 2023-10-06 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: Ready Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
