Re: [Last-Call] Yangdoctors last call review of draft-ietf-ccamp-flexe-yang-cm-02

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Hi Ladislav ,Shuping and CCAMP,

Thank you for the comments. The authors update the I-D, please check the links below to see whether the new 03-revision is satisfactory.

Regards,
Minxue

The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ccamp-flexe-yang-cm/
There is also an htmlized version available at: 
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-ccamp-flexe-yang-cm
A diff from the previous version is available at:
 https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-ccamp-flexe-yang-cm-03


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王敏学/ Wang Minxue
中国移动通信研究院 基础网络技术研究所 / China Mobile Research Institute
地址: 北京市西城区宣武门西大街32号创新大厦,100053
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From: Ladislav Lhotka via Datatracker
Date: 2023-08-14 16:49
To: yang-doctors@xxxxxxxx
CC: ccamp; draft-ietf-ccamp-flexe-yang-cm.all; last-call
Subject: Yangdoctors last call review of draft-ietf-ccamp-flexe-yang-cm-02
Reviewer: Ladislav Lhotka
Review result: Ready with Issues
 
**** General comments
 
The ietf-flexe module is a relative small YANG module based on an
implementation agreed upon by the OIF Forum. From the YANG point of view, the
only problem of the module that I found is that all configuration leaves in the
"flexe-client" container are mandatory, which eventually makes the top-level
container "ietf-flexe:flexe" mandatory. This violates the requirement in sec.
4.10 of RFC 8407: Top-level data node MUST NOT be mandatory.
 
**** Specific comments
 
***** Section 2
- The list of requirements would be better formatted as a definition list
(<dl>) of xml2rfc v3. - A spurious character entity representing Unicode
character U+12289 appears at the end of the requirement R-Group-02.
 
***** Appendices
- It would be useful to indicate (at least schematically) that <port-num>
leaves are references (leafrefs) to interfaces defined using the
ietf-interfaces module.
 
 
 
 
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