Re: [Last-Call] Yangdoctors last call review of draft-ietf-ccamp-flexe-yang-cm-02

["wangminxue@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx" <wangminxue@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Hi Ladislav ,Shuping and CCAMP,

Thank you for the comments. The authors update the I-D, please check the links below to see whether the new 03-revision is satisfactory.

Regards,

Minxue

The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:

 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ccamp-flexe-yang-cm/

There is also an htmlized version available at: 

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-ccamp-flexe-yang-cm

A diff from the previous version is available at:

 https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-ccamp-flexe-yang-cm-03

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From: Ladislav Lhotka via Datatracker

Date: 2023-08-14 16:49

To: yang-doctors@xxxxxxxx

CC: ccamp; draft-ietf-ccamp-flexe-yang-cm.all; last-call

Subject: Yangdoctors last call review of draft-ietf-ccamp-flexe-yang-cm-02

Reviewer: Ladislav Lhotka

Review result: Ready with Issues

 

**** General comments

 

The ietf-flexe module is a relative small YANG module based on an

implementation agreed upon by the OIF Forum. From the YANG point of view, the

only problem of the module that I found is that all configuration leaves in the

"flexe-client" container are mandatory, which eventually makes the top-level

container "ietf-flexe:flexe" mandatory. This violates the requirement in sec.

4.10 of RFC 8407: Top-level data node MUST NOT be mandatory.

 

**** Specific comments

 

***** Section 2

- The list of requirements would be better formatted as a definition list

(<dl>) of xml2rfc v3. - A spurious character entity representing Unicode

character U+12289 appears at the end of the requirement R-Group-02.

 

***** Appendices

- It would be useful to indicate (at least schematically) that <port-num>

leaves are references (leafrefs) to interfaces defined using the

ietf-interfaces module.

 

 

 

 

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