Re: [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-digest-headers-11

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Hi Rob,

On Thu, 1 Jun 2023, 23:12 Rob Sayre, <sayrer@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
Hi,

I put up a PR:

The current text is something one would hear in spoken American English, but it's not usually done in writing, and it mixes pluralization and the passive voice in an unidiomatic way.

I'm not attached to my suggestion, but the current text is a bit off.

You're right. Thanks for the suggested alternative, it's clearer and more direct.

Cheers
Lucas
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