Hi,
I put up a PR:
The current text is something one would hear in spoken American English, but it's not usually done in writing, and it mixes pluralization and the passive voice in an unidiomatic way.
I'm not attached to my suggestion, but the current text is a bit off.
thanks,
Rob
On Wed, May 24, 2023 at 11:12 PM Lars Eggert <lars@xxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
Joel, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document.
Lars
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