Dan, thank you for your review. I entered a No Objection ballot. Lars > On 18. Mar 2023, at 10:36, Dan Romascanu via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Reviewer: Dan Romascanu > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-asap-siptrunkingcapability-link-03 > Reviewer: Dan Romascanu > Review Date: 2023-03-18 > IETF LC End Date: 2023-03-22 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: > > This is a short and clear document describing the usage of the > 'sip-trunking-capability' link relation type by an enterprise SIP network to > retrieve a SIP trunking capability set document containing the capabilities and > configuration requirements of an ITSP. > > Major issues: > > Minor issues: > > Nits/editorial comments: > > 1. The description of the 'sip-trunking-capability' link relation by IANA does > not seem to be fully consistent with the scope of the document as defined in > Section 1. > > In Section 1: > > The capability set document > [I-D.ietf-asap-sip-auto-peer] encapsulates a set of characteristics > of an ITSP, which when retrieved by enterprise telephony network > devices allows for automated establishment of SIP [RFC3261] trunking > between the two telephony networks. > > Description: Refers to a capability set document that defines > parameters or configuration requirements for automated peering and > communication channel negotiation of the Session Initiation > Protocol (SIP). > > I would consider mentioning explicitly 'SIP trunking' in the Description of the > 'sip-trunking-capability' link relation in the registry. > > 2. Should not [I-D.ietf-asap-sip-auto-peer] be a Normative Reference? > > > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@xxxxxxxx > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
