Reviewer: Carlos Bernardos Review result: Ready with Nits I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for draft-ietf-6man-rfc6874bis. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Internet Area Directors. Document editors and shepherd(s) should treat these comments just like they would treat comments from any other IETF contributors and resolve them along with any other Last Call comments that have been received. For more details on the INT Directorate, see https://datatracker.ietf.org/group/intdir/about/ <https://datatracker.ietf.org/group/intdir/about/>. Based on my review, if I was on the IESG I would ballot this document as NO OBJECTION. The following issue is the only one I found with this document that I think SHOULD be corrected before publication: - In some OSes, as indicated in the doc, the interface name basically includes the MAC address of the interface. Because of this, if used as zone identifier, it would basically disclose the MAC address. I think some additional security considerations could be added on the impact that this might have. The following are minor issues (typos, misspelling, minor text improvements) with the document: - In section 1, I think the part "Two months later" can be removed. - While a reader of this document is probably familiar with what percent encoding is (RFC 3986), given that the document is quite verbose in explaining the stuff, it might be good to provide some short context about what percent encoding is. - RFCs are cited many times in the document (nothing wrong about it, of course). Sometimes it is done by actually using a cross-reference to the RFC, while others it is not. I'd understand that only the first time the cross-ref is used, and then note, but the document does not seem to follow any pattern. I'd suggest revising this (probably the RFC Editor would do anyway). - "normalised" --> "normalized" -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
