[Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tcpm-hystartplusplus-13

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Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review result: Ready

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.

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Document: draft-ietf-tcpm-hystartplusplus-13
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2023-02-01
IETF LC End Date: 2023-01-25
IESG Telechat date: 2023-02-16

Summary: A well written document ready to do with just one small comment.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments: Remembering that this is the GENART review undertaken
as a non-specialist, I am not sure how well known the clamp function is. I had
to look it up, but once I did it was obvious. You might consider a few words to
define it for the reader.



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