Re: [Last-Call] [Extra] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-extra-sieve-action-registry-05

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Dear Yoshiro Yoneya,

Thank you for your review.

On 11/01/2023 04:56, Yoshiro Yoneya via Datatracker wrote:
Reviewer: Yoshiro Yoneya
Review result: Ready with Nits

Reviewer: Yoshiro Yoneya
Review result: Ready with Nits

   I am assigned ARTART reviewer for this draft.

Summary:

   This draft is in good shape and almost ready for publication.  I found a few
   nits better to be corrected.

Major issues:

   None.

Minor issues:

   None.

Nits:

   In Section "2.2. Initial Sieve Action Registry":

   CURRENT
   Note that when "Action Interactions" cell is empty it means that there
   is no restriction on use of the corresponding action with any other
   action, however implementors still need to read the corresponding
   specification(s) to see if there is are any surprising behaviour.

   SUGGESTION
   Note that when "Action Interactions" cell is empty it means that there
   is no restriction on use of the corresponding action with any other
   action, however implementors still need to read the corresponding
   specification(s) to see if there is any surprising behaviour.
Ok, I removed the extraneous "are".
   In Section "4.1. Normative References":

   RFC2119 and RFC8174 are placed as normative references, but there is no
   explicit reference to them, and no "Terminology" section also, so those two
   references seemed to be unneeded (at least, as normative reference).

Well spotted. I removed them in my copy.

Best Regards,

Alexey

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