Russ, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document. (I did re-raise your concern below; authors please take note.) Lars > On Dec 3, 2022, at 21:17, Russ Housley via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Reviewer: Russ Housley > Review result: Almost Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-catalog-zones-08 > Reviewer: Russ Housley > Review Date: 2022-12-03 > IETF LC End Date: 2022-12-13 > IESG Telechat date: unknown > > > Summary: Almost Ready > > > Major Concerns: None > > > Minor Concerns: > > The document lacks an IANA Considerations section. Please add one, > even if it says that there are no actions for IANA and asks the > RFC Editor to remove the section when the document is published. > Such a section provides clarity during IANA review of the document. > > Section 3 says: > > Catalog consumers MUST ignore any RR in the catalog zone which is > meaningless to or otherwise not supported by the implementation. > > I am unsure what is meant by "meaningless". Please define the term > or provide some explanation. > > > Nits: > > Section 2 provides a list to definitions. Please add some form of > punctuation after the word being defined (a colon or a hypen or > something else to aid the reader). > > > Note: > > I did not review Appendix A or Appendix B. > > > > -- > last-call mailing list > last-call@xxxxxxxx > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
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