Thank you, Russ. Best Regards, Shuping > -----Original Message----- > From: Russ Housley [mailto:housley@xxxxxxxxxxxx] > Sent: Wednesday, November 2, 2022 11:09 PM > To: Pengshuping (Peng Shuping) <pengshuping@xxxxxxxxxx> > Cc: art@xxxxxxxx; draft-ietf-lamps-rfc3709bis.all@xxxxxxxx; last-call@xxxxxxxx; > LAMPS <spasm@xxxxxxxx> > Subject: Re: Artart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-rfc3709bis-06 > > Thanks. I have included all of these changes. A few of them were spotted > by another reviewer. > > Russ > > > On Oct 28, 2022, at 9:24 PM, Shuping Peng via Datatracker > <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote: > > > > Reviewer: Shuping Peng > > Review result: Ready with Nits > > > > I am the assigned ART-ART reviewer for this draft. > > > > Summary: > > > > This document is basically ready for publication but has nits that > > should be considered prior to publication. > > > > Nits: > > > > Section 3 > > Page 7 > > s/server operators that provides/server operators that provide > > > > Page 8 > > s/each image objects/each image object > > > > Section 4.1 > > Page 12 > > s/is outside the scope of this document/are outside the scope of this > document. > > > > Section 7 > > Page 18 > > s/many commons image formats/many common image formats > > > > s/The table also indicates the support > > requirements these image formats. > > /The table also indicates the support > > requirements of these image formats. > > > > Section 9 > > Page 20 > > s/not the of binary format if > > the image or audio. > > /not the binary format of > > the image or audio. > > > > > -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
