Thanks. I have included all of these changes. A few of them were spotted by another reviewer. Russ > On Oct 28, 2022, at 9:24 PM, Shuping Peng via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Reviewer: Shuping Peng > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned ART-ART reviewer for this draft. > > Summary: > > This document is basically ready for publication but has nits that should be > considered prior to publication. > > Nits: > > Section 3 > Page 7 > s/server operators that provides/server operators that provide > > Page 8 > s/each image objects/each image object > > Section 4.1 > Page 12 > s/is outside the scope of this document/are outside the scope of this document. > > Section 7 > Page 18 > s/many commons image formats/many common image formats > > s/The table also indicates the support > requirements these image formats. > /The table also indicates the support > requirements of these image formats. > > Section 9 > Page 20 > s/not the of binary format if > the image or audio. > /not the binary format of > the image or audio. > > -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
