Re: [Last-Call] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-homenet-naming-architecture-dhc-options-21

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Ines, thank you for your review. I have entered a Discuss ballot for this document based on my own review.

Lars


> On 2022-10-4, at 19:57, Ines Robles via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Ines Robles
> Review result: Ready with Nits
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-homenet-naming-architecture-dhc-options-??
> Reviewer: Ines Robles
> Review Date: 2022-10-04
> IETF LC End Date: 2022-10-04
> IESG Telechat date: 2022-10-20
> 
> Summary:
> 
> This document defines DHCPv6 options so an Homenet Naming Authority (HNA) can
> automatically proceed to the appropriate configuration and outsource the
> authoritative naming service for the home network.
> 
> The document is well written and easy to understand.
> 
> I have two minor questions as nits.
> 
> Major issues: None
> Minor issues: None
> Nits/editorial comments/Questions:
> 
> 1- Have you consider in this document RFC 7227- Guidelines for Creating New
> DHCPv6 Options -? If yes, should it be added in the references? If not, why
> not? 2- Page 9: "The use of DHCPv6 options provides a similar level of trust as
> the one used to provide the IP prefix." In which features are similar? In which
> features are dissimilar?
> 
> Thanks for this document,
> 
> Ines.
> 
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