Hi Meral,
Thanks for the comments.
On Thu, Jul 28, 2022 at 12:01 AM Meral Shirazipour via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote:
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review result: Ready with Nits
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Document: draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-yang-data-model-14
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2022-07-27
IETF LC End Date: 2022-08-02
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
Summary: This draft is almost ready to be published as Standards Track RFC.
Major issues:
Minor issues:
In Intro section please clarify benefits of this RFC formalizing the
description of the compression rules. :
"The goal of this document is to formalize the description of the rules to
offer" to allow X Y Z ?
There is a brief description in the introduction. I added few words in the abstract:for -15
This document formalizes the description of the rules for better interoperability between SCHC instances either
to exchange a set of rules or to modify some rules parameters.
Nits/editorial comments:
[Page 3], Section 3, Typo
"options definied"-->"options defined"
done
[Page 3], Section 3, Typo
"serveur"-->"server"
done
[Page 6], Section 3.7, Typo
"same enconding."-->"same encoding."
done
[Page 7], Section 3.10.1, Typo
"unidirectionnal,"--->"unidirectional,"
done
[Page 10], Section 3.10.5, Typo
"range sould"-->"range should"
"recommandation"-->"recommendation"
done
[Page 10], Section 3.10.5, Typo
"the the"-->"the"
done
[Page 10], Section 4, Typo
"idenfied"-->"identified"
done
[Page 33], Typo x2
"bidirectionnal is forbiden"-->"bidirectional is forbidden"
don't find, should have corrected before
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