Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-yang-data-model-14 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2022-07-27 IETF LC End Date: 2022-08-02 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: This draft is almost ready to be published as Standards Track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: In Intro section please clarify benefits of this RFC formalizing the description of the compression rules. : "The goal of this document is to formalize the description of the rules to offer" to allow X Y Z ? Nits/editorial comments: [Page 3], Section 3, Typo "options definied"-->"options defined" [Page 3], Section 3, Typo "serveur"-->"server" [Page 6], Section 3.7, Typo "same enconding."-->"same encoding." [Page 7], Section 3.10.1, Typo "unidirectionnal,"--->"unidirectional," [Page 10], Section 3.10.5, Typo "range sould"-->"range should" "recommandation"-->"recommendation" [Page 10], Section 3.10.5, Typo "the the"-->"the" [Page 10], Section 4, Typo "idenfied"-->"identified" [Page 33], Typo x2 "bidirectionnal is forbiden"-->"bidirectional is forbidden" -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
