bo wu, thanks for the review > suggestions: > - Adds the reason why choosing "obsolete" RFC 8210 instead of "update" as mohamed (wisely) forced correction of the flags mess, it now updates, as opposed to obsoletes. > the protocol version has been updated from 1 to 2 - The title "Protocol Version > Negotiation" to be added to section 7 description. - Some major changes to > other sections to be added: > 5.1 Flags adds ASPA PDU specific processing no longer > 5.8. End of Data adds clarification text on version 1 changes > 14. IANA Considerations imiho, these are not major. the section is meant to point out major changes. but if you feel strongly, do say so and we can negotiate. thanks! randy -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
